AMR Challenge - Out of the box

Here's my challenge "Out of the Box" for www.allmomentsremembered.com. We were challenged to things that we normally don't use for whatever the reason. I'm very structured so I decided to try flourishes with clear stamps, crookedness, white space, 3 different PP on CS...I was reallllllly happy with the end result, until I decided to ink the edges of the poem, which I didn't remove, I just put some paper underneath it, and now I think it looks sloppy and also when I put our names on it...The writing wasn't too bad, I just don't think it looks right where it's at or even at all...Maybe should have used the cricut. Thanks for looking...